Hi Taine- I hope you enjoyed looking at your writing with the critical eye. There are many things you pointed out that you are doing well. I notice with your paragraphs that each detail supports the main idea of the paragraph with is excellent. I think your next step would be to work on sentence structure so that the message you are trying to give is portrayed clearly. Well done Taine!
Hi Taine- I hope you enjoyed looking at your writing with the critical eye. There are many things you pointed out that you are doing well. I notice with your paragraphs that each detail supports the main idea of the paragraph with is excellent. I think your next step would be to work on sentence structure so that the message you are trying to give is portrayed clearly. Well done Taine!
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